Oh, what a heartbreaking story! The title and the prompt prepare us for something sad, but... this use of the prompt doubles an existing tragedy. I'm so glad to see a pregnancy fic which is essentially tied to a poignant canon situation, and you make me feel that all this could have really happened.
I love the way you portray Augusta by showing her emotions and again hiding them (from the healer) behind her sharp words. The details of Neville's as well his parents' things make the second scene vivid. And it's excellent how you give us a glimpse of Frank and Alice in between those lines Augusta reads. Wonderfully done!
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Date: 2022-03-21 06:26 pm (UTC)I love the way you portray Augusta by showing her emotions and again hiding them (from the healer) behind her sharp words. The details of Neville's as well his parents' things make the second scene vivid. And it's excellent how you give us a glimpse of Frank and Alice in between those lines Augusta reads. Wonderfully done!