Date: 2019-04-08 09:32 pm (UTC)
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i love your characterization of narcissa here. every sentence felt so very her. i loved their arguing over whose fault it was.

the line “It’s a new beginning,” she whispered, grasping his fingers when he made a small, broken sound. was so beautiful, it made my heart clench.

and the last bit with them bickering about who to tell draco and then draco suprising them with the news was so funny.

this was just such a lovely story overall and a delight to read.
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